Finishing School *Summer 2020 Discount*

$750 for a full manuscript review – save $150 off $900 price!

July and August 2020 only

Use the summer to finish your book!


new product: The Truth Talks

A one-hour Zoom conversation in which I use special feedback techniques to help you find your story. Time and time again it is during a conversation that the truth–the theme, the central question, the core concern that is not yet on the page–comes out. In these talks, I read your work first, then we talk and I listen and take notes and play back to you what I hear. Use it as a one-time check-in on a piece or a book-length manuscript, or to book-end the longer editing or manuscript review process.

One hour Zoom Truth Talk = $125

Manuscript Review

$900 includes:

Feedback on up to 300 pages of prose, including plot, structure, narrative arc, story, voice, tone, sentences, pacing, clarity + conversation via Skype or phone until you are on a clear path.

* For Lesley alumni and affiliates: $750

CONTACT ME AT: bookwhisperercoaching@gmail.com or janetpocorobba@yahoo.com

The story you choose to tell is the life you choose to live.

— Sandra Scofield, novelist

Who is the Book Whisperer?

I’m a published author with over twenty years of experience teaching writers. I also have a book coaching *superpower.*

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You need someone to get into the book with you and work side by side. You need a listener. You need a book whisperer.

To help you finish I will:

  • give you 2000+ words of itemized feedback on up to 300 pages of prose, including plot, structure, point of view, pacing, voice, tone, and syntax
  • ask poignant questions and listen to both your conscious and unconscious answers
  • offer craft exercises and practices to take your writing to the next level
  • discuss your work via phone or Skype until we nail down a way to move forward
  • suggest relevant literature to read and study as a guide in your work

There’s another reason why I want to help people complete their books. Finishing is the one thing that will help you grow as a writer. And the fact that there are so many writers out there with unfinished manuscripts, well….I call it a book-finishing crisis.

We must find a way to complete them because in the finishing lies the secret to writing.

What is that secret?

It’s your own personal secret, so I don’t know what that is yet. The key to your own work is in YOU. Not in any expert.

If we work together, I guarantee you’ll find it, or your money back.

Contact me for a free consult: bookwhisperercoaching@gmail.com or janetpocorobba@yahoo.com

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